Tuesday, March 21, 2006

Guest Blogger - Maya

Due to our normal blogger being abnormally busy and smack dab in the middle of the busiest two weeks of the year at her work, we will be posting an entry from Maya today.

The Snowstorm

by Maya

School was almost out when the princibal came in and said school is out. Everyone ran outside except me, my 3 friends and the teacher. The doors wer locked. School was dismissed.

We smile.

We go to the lunch room. We eat pizza like crazy. All of a sudden a window cracks. Uh-oh! The roof falls in and the power goes out. We ran down the hall. We feel a little scard.

We like running so we play tag. We hear a siren coming. It's the fire rescue.

We don't want to leave.



(I particularly like the verb tense changes. It conveys the confusion and the fear of the situation. Also, why don't they want to leave with the fire rescue people? Is this the first glimpse of anti-authority Maya? Hmmmmm......)

4 Comments:

At 1:17 PM, Blogger anika said...

Firemen?! Shari, why couldn't WE have been there??? I like tag too.

 
At 6:00 PM, Blogger rennratt said...

Creativity obviously runs in the family. Thank you for sharing!

 
At 1:48 AM, Blogger Ant said...

I'd be properly scard if the roof fell in...

 
At 2:55 AM, Blogger Squishi said...

school was out? lunchroom? pizza?

Goodness, different school languages to here in australia.

Here the lunchroom is "the great outdoors", when school is out, it's school holidays, and pizza is forbidden as it's junk food.

Plus we don't have snowstorms either.

Nevertheless, it was a very interesting story. She should guest blog more often :)

 

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